Water Purifier

beautifulx333 asked:


Having tough time with my sentences for narrative writing..
Are my sentences making sense as for narrative?

1. Our superior and outstanding ability to manufacture perfect products have been recognized on the Guinness Book of World Records in category of producing water purifier facility with our idea to maximize our prominent production line that bring in the system of allowing one assigned researcher with his name consisted on one specific product that granting him in full charge of responsibility and quality of
that single product till its finishing process.

2. Le Junio sets higher criteria for quality of our products, even on the general quality test for every manufactured goods.

3. All of our products bring into a thorough examination that is higher the level of international standard.

I had to describe a company and its products in narration.
Do they sound smooth?

Rueben

jeje l asked:


I have written some of sentences for a narrative writing that I will be doing soon.

Are they making sense?

1) Le Flor is the first and only company in the world that has developed its own water purifier membrane filter, primarily requiring complicated and delicate maintenance at level of constant temperature and humidity, to function on automatic, designated-to-perform manufacturing-procedure system which produce perfectly composed membrane filter at continual pace of every 33 seconds with less than 0.8% in its defect rate.

2) Le Flor’s quality in manufactured goods and expert in producing techniques had been highly well reputed throughout the global market by acquiring NSF Certificate in 2003 and other international recognizing certifications.

Do you think they can be revised in a way that can make sound better for audiences?

Help!

Quincy