Any writers help me with my writing?
Having tough time with my sentences for narrative writing..
Are my sentences making sense as for narrative?
1. Our superior and outstanding ability to manufacture perfect products have been recognized on the Guinness Book of World Records in category of producing water purifier facility with our idea to maximize our prominent production line that bring in the system of allowing one assigned researcher with his name consisted on one specific product that granting him in full charge of responsibility and quality of
that single product till its finishing process.
2. Le Junio sets higher criteria for quality of our products, even on the general quality test for every manufactured goods.
3. All of our products bring into a thorough examination that is higher the level of international standard.
I had to describe a company and its products in narration.
Do they sound smooth?
Rueben
February 26, 2009 - 3:27 PM Comments: Closed
