Water Purifier

beautifulx333 asked:


Do they make sense? If not, please help

1) Le Flor is the first and only company in the world that has developed its own water purifier membrane filter, primarily requiring complicated and delicate maintenance at level of constant temperature and humidity, to function on automatic, designated-to-perform manufacturing-procedure system which produce perfectly composed membrane filter at continual pace of every 33 seconds with less than 0.8% in its defect rate.

2) Le Flor’s quality in manufactured goods and expert in producing techniques had been highly well reputed throughout the global market by acquiring NSF Certificate in 2003 and other international recognizing certifications.

3) Le Flor is in the life of people who care for their health and wellness.

4) Le Flor is with people who care for nature.

5) Le Flor constantly stands on the top rank in field of Eco-friendly Electronic Home Appliances.

6) Universally widespread Mega-trend - ‘health & wellness.

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Morris

jeje l asked:


I have written some of sentences for a narrative writing that I will be doing soon.

Are they making sense?

1) Le Flor is the first and only company in the world that has developed its own water purifier membrane filter, primarily requiring complicated and delicate maintenance at level of constant temperature and humidity, to function on automatic, designated-to-perform manufacturing-procedure system which produce perfectly composed membrane filter at continual pace of every 33 seconds with less than 0.8% in its defect rate.

2) Le Flor’s quality in manufactured goods and expert in producing techniques had been highly well reputed throughout the global market by acquiring NSF Certificate in 2003 and other international recognizing certifications.

Do you think they can be revised in a way that can make sound better for audiences?

Help!

Quincy