praise or criticize (inspirational poetry)?
Lord of my Dreams
Emerging from the tunnel of darkness
I awoke with a feeling of thankfulness
For I was falling from the darkest of skies
A dream of my fears covered my eyes
Disarrayed with illusions of a bottomless pit
Tattooed with a feeling I couldn’t forget
But it was then,when I first saw the light
My shiniest day,came in the middle of the night
Overcoming my fear,with your presence by my side
The Lord of my dreams,was suddenly my guide
Showing me a spirit,I have never seen before
Lord,it was you,knocking at my door
The sound awoke me,as I sat up in bed
Then I bowed my head to pray,and this is what I said
“Lord,your arms were open for me when I started to fall
I give you my heart,my soul,I give you my all
For you are the purifier of my water
And my life ever after!”
Amen
Eldon Krueger
Grant
May 17, 2009 - 9:34 PM
SouthernBelle
May 20, 2009 | 6:48 AMWow! You have a great talent! I think it is a beautiful work of art and it could inspire others.
wannaplaytoo2001
May 22, 2009 | 11:33 PMpraise! funny how many have to come through the dark into the light,or those who fall away and need to be guided back. Very beautifully written thank you for sharing it
whendovescry
May 26, 2009 | 4:56 AMYes, it was very inspirational and written well. Congratualtions on your efforts in a way to honor Jesus Christ…Very nice…..